IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 8

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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You hired a car from a company, while. While you were driving you had a small accident. Write a letter to the company to explain it. In your letter: when and where you hired it describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident

I am writing to inform you that, I had taken the 4 wheeler from our company on yesterday for my official work. Because unfortunately, I met with a small accident today morning.

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Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others, however, say that cooperation and team working skills are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, teaching students to be competing at school is debatable. Many people argue that children must be taught to be working competitively at school while others think that being cooperative and having good teamwork is more valuable. This essay will discuss both ideas and state my personal opinion regarding the views.

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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: • Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. • Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. • Give details of when you would be available for work.

I would like to express my interest to apply for the voluntary position that was advertised in the Times newspaper on the 28th January 2021.

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transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What are the causes of this problem, and how could the situation be improved?

Traffic congestion poses a serious threat to many countries. Experts throughout the world have argued that delayed transportation and extended travel times due to unreliable transport systems are the most popular issues in city regions. This essay will discuss the major causes associated with this issue and propose some possible solutions to mitigate the problem with relevant examples

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A child how he grows up depends on how they were brought up by their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that the way a boy or girl raises up is intrinsically connected to how their relatives educated him. I strongly disagree with the view owing to the fact familiar genes and interfere in the growing process. Although the surrounding environment has its role in this process. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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Some think increasing business and cultural contact between nations is positive. Others think it leads to the disappearance of the national identity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

Most nations globally are united together in the fight for humanity even if they are different culturally. Some people are of the opinion that enhancing trade and cultural relations is seen as a positive move whereas others believe that this move will annihilate the country's identity. In this essay, I will discuss both points and argue that bringing nations together should be seen as a win because of these reasons: world peace, financial help and military aid when needed.

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There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweight the benefits of mobile phone?

Never before in human history, have there been so many mobile phones in all walks of life as right now. As a result, being the breakthrough of the industrial revolution, the usage of cells has caused prevalent problems among people. It has extended its arms, from social, medical and technical levels. Despite the dilemma, I firmly believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages which would be examined in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Your photograph recently won a photography competition and will be shown in an exhibition. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter. describe the photograph you sent to the competition. tell him/her about the exhibition where your photo will be shown. invite him/her to the exhibition

Hope you are doing well. Firstly, I am delighted to share the good news with you that I have won a photography competition. In addition, it will be displayed in the annual art exhibition, which is to be held on 15 January 2022.

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Nowadays, a lot of offices employ open-space designs instead of separate rooms for work. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Many offices these days are opting for open designs over more traditional, compartmentalized floor plans. In my opinion, despite the limited advantages for efficiency, this is a positive change due to its social and work-related benefits.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

In the era of technology, discussions about whether technology will threaten certain types of occupations. Some claim that most jobs will be invaded by these machines in the near future. In my opinion, robots will play a significant role in the future, but they will not take over the whole job market.

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There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweight the benefits of mobile phone?

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Some people think that public art should be funded by governments, while others believe that it should be funded by other sources. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People's opinions differ as to whether or not governments should invest in public art. I agree that it should be funded by others; however, there is some issue to consider. Both sides along with my perspective will be outlined in the following paragraphs.

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There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweight the benefits of mobile phone?

Nowadays, there are issues associated with the use of mobiles in the social, medical and technical fields. In spite of these issues, I would argue that the benefits of cellular phones outweigh the drawbacks. In the forthcoming paragraphs, forms of these troubles and the reasons for the disagreement will be discussed in detail.

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some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

The migration of the younger generation to urban areas is leaving many rural locations populated predominantly by the elderly. I would argue that the loss of young people from the rural landscape has problematic consequences. The forthcoming paragraphs will highlight the most serious reasons which are the depletion of the rural workforce and the loss of local education facilities.

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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays have been witnessing an increase in the adoption of different structures of pills. Nevertheless, in the best scenario, these ways are ineffective, and on the worst occasion, they may be harmful. I disagree to a certain extent; however, there is some issue to consider. Both sides along with my perspective will be outlined in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

offspring are the backbone of every country. So, there are communities who tend to believe that youngsters should be encouraged to initiate social work as it will result in flourished society and individualistic growth of youngsters themselves. I, too believe that this motivation has more benefits than its drawbacks.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The topic of economic rise has become increasingly popular nowadays.A lot of countries all over the world choose this type of progress as the main goal for sustainable growth.On the other hand,we can observe that some parts of society think that government should concentrate on the other parts of progress equally.As for me,I partially agree with both sides ,and in this essay ,we discuss this topic more deeply.

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Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others, however, say that cooperation and team working skills are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays , some people believe that the younger generations should learn how to compete with each other at schools , however , other opponents are quick to point out that fact that coordination and teamwork skills are more critical to success . This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of both views and then I will include my own opinion .

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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, • describe the problem with the equipment • explain how this problem is affecting your work • say what you want the shop or company to do

I am writing to draw your attention to the issue of my laptop charger not working. I made a purchase of a new laptop on the 25 of December at your store in lotus road, attached is a copy of the receipt for your reference. However, the charging cable stopped working after two days of use, and ever since I am unable to use my laptop.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

The issue related to salary and job satisfaction which is more important has been widely discussed among people over countries. Some argue that work enjoyment is the foremost factor for them to assess a job. I hold different attitudes towards this issue. As far as economy, efficiency, healthy are concerned, I strongly hold that big earnings are more important than work enjoyment.

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