IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 4

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it. You should write at least 150 words.

I am writing this letter to inform you that I will miss our meeting for the tutoring class that I am applying to in your reputable institute. My name is Ali Hammoud, and I am currently a civil engineer in a construction company called MS technology.

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Travelling in group with a tour guide is the best way to travel. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The vast majority of the population deems that a presence of a tour guide is composed of a necessary part throughout the tour destination while others argue with this position and claim that visitors can be travelled independently. I advocate strongly with these statements and am going to reflect on this essay my own view of such a common issue and to discuss both opinions.

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Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

I am writing to let you know that I have forgotten to take my jacket with me after the movie. I watched the afternoon show on Saturday 3 January 2021, I believe that I have left my jacket in the cinema hall.

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You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organiser of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include • Details about the meeting • The problem you face • What should be done

I am writing to let you know that the internet service provided by the hotel which our annual general meeting was held was unsatisfactory. The event took place on 01 January 2021 at the Grand Hotel Colombo. Although the overall hospitality was remarkable, the meeting did not go smoothly, due to the network issues.

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Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

The majority of the masses choose to wake up before the usual time and begin the daily work. While others adopt to get up late opportunity in the day and be at work until midnight. In my opinion, I opt for the regular working hours as it is beneficial to strength and wealth. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view.

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you recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. write a letter to the manager of the hotel. in your letter 1- Say where you think left the papers 2- explain why they are so important 3- tell the manager what you want him to do

I am writing this letter in regards to forgotten papers at the hotel during my stay. As you might know, I am Dhruv Goyani, who stayed in your hotel for 2 days.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some public argues that there are highly lots of options for contemporary people. This view deserves a significant topic of discussion by ordinary citizens and politicians regarding the advantages and the disadvantages of a capitalistic society. As a representative citizen of the middle-class in South Korea, I partly agree with the statement above. The reasons why are as follows.

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Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 254 words.

Nowadays multinational companies hire an enormous quantity of staff to work and to enhance their economical boundaries. Some people argue that if employees who work for large organizations and factories must shift to the countryside so that the traffic and housing problems must be resolved. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the above statement because these citizens would waste their precious time while commuting to the office.

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Some people think children should have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

There is a debate whether offspring should be given the space to commit mistakes, while others think that families should not allow their offspring to commit mistakes. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument, and then I will give my opinion.

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Some people think that only managers should make decisions in the company while others think that employees should also be involved in the process of decision-making . Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The decisions should be made by only supervisors or executives, according to some people. Other people, nevertheless, opine that everyone in a company should be involved in making these things. In my opinion, all members should decide on their own jobs. Both sides along with my perspectives linked to the topic will be outlined in the following paragraphs.

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It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree of disagree

Arguably, it is commented whether the world-ruling power should use public funds sensitizing and mobilizing citizens to avert sickness or it should allocate the same money to individuals cure. Personally, I strongly agree with the view since it is worthy of preventing rather than treating. Although a cure is less spending than prevention. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it. You do NOT need to write your own address. You should write at least 150 words.

Thank you for providing me with the opportunity for an interview session at your law college. However, I have to inform you that due to an unavoidable circumstance, I will not be able to attend it because my exam time clashes with the one-to-one round.

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Some people think children should have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

Some would argue that youngsters ought to have the freedom to make mistakes, whilst some believe that it is adults' duty to protect their offspring from any wrong activities. Although a miserable fault and learning from that can build a psychologically strong man, I personally do not agree with that statement because one evil step can make a child suffer and therefore parents can help them with their life experience.

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New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

These days, technologies have been developed rapidly by brilliant humans and become one of the most significant associated with everyone’s life. Moreover, this statement creates the different procedures which convert their daily routine. In this essay, I absolutely agree with modern logic is transforming consumer's life due to comfortable and spending times.

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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You do not need to write any addresses

I am writing to complain about the food served at your restaurant. I had visited your restaurant with my family last weekend and our experience was awful.

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Today family members eat fewer meals together. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative trend?

In recent years it's been observed that more and more families are rarely gathering to have the daily meals together.I believe that this is happening because people are unable to balance between their occupations and personal life which has led to major cracks in normal family structure.

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You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference. Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

I am pleased to inform you that I am planning to give a presentation on ways to reduce the carbon footprints to protect our environment. I recently had an opportunity to attend a conference about the environmental impact due to human activities.

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Government plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the authority. - Explain where you came to know about the news. - Describe the negative effects of airport construction - Ask to consider alternate site for airport construction No less than 150 words

This is Jeevitha. I am writing in connection with the plan of constructing an airport in my locality that was mentioned in the daily newspaper on the 4th of January 2022.

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You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.

Hope this letter finds you well. I had enjoyed the last summer vacation with you and your family. I want to tell you important news about my community.

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the government should lower the bughet on the arts in order to allocate more money to education. To extend do you agree?

It is questioned if the government should give more money to education than the arts. On my behalf, I think that, in some way, art is a way of cultivating people too. Accordingly, it shouldn´t be possible to choose one. After all, places such as museums, galleries, exhibitions, concerts, dancing and other performances, form part of today´s education and even if the state had a bigger budget for schools, these institutions alone will never be enough.

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