IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 2

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: Give details of your visit to the restaurant Explain the reason for the celebration Say what you liked about the food or service Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

I am writing to thank you for the decent meal that we ate at your restaurant yesterday.I also thank you for the nice service you provided, and I wish all the success to you and your crew.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is positive or negative development?

The advertising industry is one of the most important topics for producers. They insist on their products which are produced in a new way. Some of them lie in this way and this is not the right way of selling. Its cons are more than pros and I think it is a negative point for development.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people believe that economic and social status are the factors to value an individual's worth today, and honour, compassion, belief, tend to be classified as old fashioned values and are no longer essential in assessing someone else worth. However, I strongly disagree with the statement because well-being and self-respect are the long-lasting aspects that all human being needs to have.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development? You should write at least 250 words.

It is believed that the recent machinery facilitated the music and e-books acquisition from the internet through download. In my opinion, it is a negative development since it makes straightforward the piracy enriching wrong individuals. Although it is an outlet for artists and authors to become popular. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide anecdotal evidence to prove the arguments.

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Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?

After globalization, the international student exchange programs are increasing rapidly. Some teachers believe this action would be advantageous for all teenage academic pupils. I reckon, the benefits of collaboration and knowledge expansion will outweigh the drawbacks. We will discuss further on this topic and exhibit the reasons to support my opinion.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Despite the advancements made in cultural farming, many segments of society around the world are still suffering from starvation. Both causes and solutions of this issue will be discussed in detail in the following paragraphs before the conclusion is reached.

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Arguably, it is commented that entities trading in a specific region should not only be focused on profiting. However, they should care for the local communities. Personally, I strongly agree with the view since enterprises have responsibilities to develop neighbourhoods. Although this development is highly criticised by managers. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide anecdotal evidence to prove the arguments.

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Men and women can never share the same responsibilities at home and in everyday life. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

The discrimination between males and females has existed from ancestor time, and both were supposed to engage in a particular type of activities. Even in today’s contemporary society, some conservatives assert that they should confine themselves to designated roles and responsibilities as per the old-time and I completely disagree with it.

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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Thank them for the photos and for the holiday Explain why you don't write earlier Invite them to como and stay with you.

I’m just writing to let you know that I’ve received the pictures from our holidays.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

Arguably, it is commented that the appropriate age to be engaged should be the minimum age of 21. Personally, I strongly disagree with the view since the overwhelming majority of individuals live in the democratic rule where Boys and Girls choose their right time to mate Although a tiny minority is influenced by these crazies ideas. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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Today many people frequently change their jobs. What problems does it create? How to solve them?

Nowadays, some individuals often alter their works. This essay will suggest that the biggest issues created by frequent job change are a decline in self-development and negative impact on companies and then argue that long-term employment contracts and surveys conducted by clients are the most viable solutions.

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Some universities now offers their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

It is clear that online courses are becoming a common feature of university education. Although there are some drawbacks of Internet-based learning, I agree that its benefits should be considered far greater.

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You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

I am writing to let you know how much I enjoyed your recent concert in Mumbai. I have been a huge fan of yours and seeing you perform live was such a blessing.

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Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves.Some people think that it is good thing, while others think that it has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today's world, the controversial topic concerning advertisements never fails to attract public attention. Even most companies are announcing for themselves by sponsoring play. Some people believe that using play for commercial announcements is beneficial, however, others do not agree with them and think that it has some drawbacks. In my opinion, I believe that corporations could gain more if they advertise their products or services through sponsoring sports.

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"Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

Recently, various aspects of the digital world and education caused so much stress for youngsters, which of course could be reduced. In other words, it would be diminished if the situation such as trending comparison between children controlled by educating people.

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Your recently visited a store and didn't like the customer service there. Write a complaint letter to the store manager and say -What was the issue there? -Why wasn't the staff helpful? -Suggest what can be done about it

I am writing this letter to file a complaint about the unpleasant treatment that I have received during my shopping tour inside your research institute. In fact, I was searching for significant reading materials for my master degree thesis.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Arguably, it is relevant to Boys and Girls to distinguish the gap between good and bad things at an earlier stage of their lives and instil castigation as the way out to teach them. Personally, I strongly disagree with the view since a better education method is not necessarily to punish. Although in extreme cases this measure is the unique outlet. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that adolescence can be a difficult period for both youngsters and their parents. Although some people believe that conflict at this time does more harm than good, I would argue otherwise, the reason being it would play an essential role in turning them into mature.

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Many products that we buy are made in other countries.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion

Some individuals commented that the overwhelming majority of commodities available are made in other countries. Personally, I believe it has more drawbacks than benefits since delaying to delivery of goods makes the recipient nation dependent. Although, it has its advantages. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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The idea of having single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout the life.

These days, most individuals are opting for numerous ways to earn incomes and they are doing much business because they thought that pursuing a single job is not in trend. So, in future, the learning will be different that remains till the life. Whereas, others believe that the public should choose a distinct number of trades and the reasons behind it which will be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.

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