IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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I am writing this in regard to the part-time course I am taking at your institute. The course is suitable for me and I get to learn so many things because of it. However, at the same ,time I am doing a full-time job and that is why I find it difficult to continue with the course I am enrolled in.
Plenty of research said that there is a detrimental substance that includes some food and drink products that should be prohibited from the marketplace. I completely agree with the statement that this essay will elaborate on.
I am writing this to express my gratitude towards services received at your cafe. I am a regular customer of yours and visit the cafe every evening. I like the food quality and hospitality of your firm and I must say they are of benchmark quality.
I am writing this to express my dissatisfaction with the quality of food, which was brought from your supermarket located near the bus stand in the Kudasan area. I recently bought ready-to-eat pizza from your store and upon reaching home, I found out that it was in bad condition.
In contemporary times, some opine advertising is a crucial aspect of a product or brand for driving sales in the market. While others argue that advertisements have normalised and are no longer a driving force in sales. In my opinion, to understand the role of ads in the current market both views will be discussed in detail.
In our modern life, the majority of individuals point out that almost all teens should be demanded to do volunteer activities in their leisure time to assist the local public as they strongly believe that this would be beneficial for teenagers and society as well. From my point of view, I disagree with this controversial topic.
I writing this in regard to an interview scheduled for me regarding admission to your college on 28th January. I have applied for the program of computer engineering and I have been shortlisted for further process, which is face to face meeting to decide the future course of the process. My application number for admission is 1234.
there is a current debate surrounding whether the advancement of technology has made shopping become easier or more difficult these days. personally, I hold the belief that the development of technology has assisted people to go shopping in a much simpler way, despite certain drawbacks of this tendency.
With the disappearance of the middle class, the disparity between the poor and the rich has peaked. While most of the population suffers from poverty, a handful of people hold a large portion of the wealth. This social injustice may cause depression among the masses and lead to a loss of faith in the future. Possible solutions to the problem include implementing income redistribution policies, a dynamic tax system and providing incentives.
Some educationists might claim that children can have unlimited potential to do anything, whereas some psychologists think expressing this kind of message to young kids can lead to low self-esteem if they fail at doing something or have few resources to do so. In the following essay, I would elaborate further on the viewpoints from both sides.
I hope you doing well. I am writing to apologize for me was late for your wedding. I am really sorry that I missed the beginning of the ceremony. But don't worry, our friend Sara told me everything in detail and showed me a video.
I work for VisionBase Solutions as a senior HR which is situated right next to your building. As a team, we are planning to organize a small party, for our staff as a token of appreciation for the successful project they delivered.
In the present society, children are more likely to get allowances from their parents, and some of them may learn to manage money at a young age, It may be because parents expect their offspring can recognize material values. personally, I think this is a good education method, and I will elaborate on it later.
Apple Daily in Taiwan announced they would completely transform the newspapers into digital ones. The final paper edition was sold out in a short time as many of its readers bought it for memorizing this historical moment. It makes most people wonder whether physical newspapers or books will be replaced by free and timely information online. I opined the opposite, those valuable materials can never be out-of-date.
It is argued that social media sites(such as Facebook) have a massive negative impact on the youngest lives and society. I disagree with this opinion and I believe that it helps them to be more aware of what happens in society and communicate with other people and express themselves.
I am Raj , and I have seen an advert, related to a job in your hotel for this summer. I have done graduation in MBA Hotel Management and have sound experience working in a Multi-National hotel chain for 10 years. My current designation is Manager , have handled large parties and made customers always happy. Team members always felt happy while working under my supervision. Also , I am a quick learner and can adapt easily to any atmosphere. I am the right candidate whom you are looking for.
I am writing this to express my dissatisfaction with the services received at the airport. I took the flight from Ahmedabad to London with booking number AB123 on date 28th January this year. The flight took off at 9:30 AM local time and landed at the airport in London at 6:30 PM local time.
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