IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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I am writing this letter with regard to the job opportunity that you mentioned while we are on a flight going to the Philippines, last March 15th. We had a great talk about your business and I was amazed at how you have grown your business in just a few years.
I am Onyinyechi Osbert, the fair-skinned Nigerian lady who sat next to you in the aeroplane as you travelled from Nairobi Kenya to New Zealand on the 19th of February 2023. We got talking and I was delighted to know you are the owner of the well-known crunches fast food with over 150 branches across west Africa. In the cause of our discussion, you offered to give me an opportunity to work in any of your Kenyan branches when I return to base.
There is an ongoing debate that whether companies allow employees after 65 or elderly people are not considered to continue their work. From my perspective, I think it should be a person's decision if he works after 65 or not. In the forthcoming essay, I will explain both viewpoints.
I, Kumarjeet Poddar, am currently associated with Capgemini India and I reside in Mumbai, precisely Santacruz. So, I prefer the bus to commute to my office location. Nowadays, I am facing some issues. Hence, I would like to tell you that the frequency of buses is not optimistic.
Advertisement has become a business now. All the companies use different platforms and tactics to advertise and attract the general public. In this regard, social media has played an important role. However, I completely agree with the statement that people follow trends and want to look the same. In this essay, I will try to discuss different reasons why is it so.
Hope this letter finds you in the best of health and spirit. I'm writing this letter to inform you that I have come back to my country to settle my family's crisis.
Preserving the environment is a fundamental duty of everyone. Destroying the ecosystem will change numerous aspects of the environment and global warming and deforestation are the more concerned issues. In my opinion, human beings are not very scrutinised for these issues and contribute to global warming and air pollution all over the world.
Fashion is an important part of today’s human culture. It has a tendency to influence the ways of individuals in terms of dressing and their hairstyle. In my opinion, it is a positive and negative development for society. This essay will discuss this issue comprehensively.
My name is Injun Lee; I visited your restaurant as a customer last week, and I saw the advertisement for a part-time job in the window by chance. I have been looking for a business to work for a few weeks. If you are seeking the right candidate, please allocate me to the position.
Education is considered the reason for success , while some countries believe the qwww11111111`opposite way , they believe that education cannot help people for improving their financial condition .This essay will not only describe the possible reasons ,but also some relevant measures for reducing this issue.
I hope you are doing well. I am Rabiah Khalid from Pakistan currently living in Germany. Recently, I came across one of your articles written in the magazine XYZ about current politics in Pakistan. This article shattered me into pieces after knowing how you are depicting my country as its people are already going through a lot.
I hope you are doing well. Myself Rabiah Khalid from Faisalabad. I have done a Master's in Food Technology from the University of Agriculture, Faisalabad. Moreover, during my bachelor's, I have done an internship at Nestle Pakistan Limited, Kabirwala Factory as an Associate intern in "Quality Assurance Department". Also, I have done 2 months internship at Halal Research Council as a Virtual intern.
It is debatable whether the government should announce the law to manage the consumption of freshwater or allow residents to use it freely. From my perspective, both opinions are convincing to a certain extent, but I still find the former more reasonable. The following paragraphs would shed light on my viewpoint.
The pie charts give information about the average proportion in usual meals of three types of fibres sodium, saturated fat and added sugar, all of which may be harmful if eaten too much. It is important to note that the measure of using these nutrients in dinner is higher except for added sugar in that meal.
the charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of noutrientd, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Many people believe that the extinction of flora and fauna is our main environmental issue. Meanwhile, the rest contradicted the idea and agreed that we have to pay more attention to other environmental problems. I think global warming and climate change bring more major impacts rather that the reduction of creature species.
Many people believe that the extinction of flora and fauna is our main environmental issue. Meanwhile, the rest contradicted the idea and agreed that we have to pay more attention to other environmental problems. I think global warming and climate change bring more major impacts rather that the reduction of creature species.
My name is Ugha Tyui and I am a middle engineer in our company. I am writing this letter to ask you about the opportunity to work in our head office in Canada for about six months. The reason I am asking about it is that I want to build stronger relationships with our authorities and develop my skills there. Moreover, I am considering the possibility to live in Canada so if the facilities suit me well there, I will do my best to move here.
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