IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 6

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

I am writing this letter regarding several issues with your mean of transport during the previous fifteen days. Moreover, the citizens of my town are complaining about the transparency of your office and are demanding from me to represent their complaints.

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Many people like unhealthy food although they know it is bad for them. Why? What are the effective ways to improve people's eating habits?

In the modern world where convenience takes priority, more concerns are stemmed from people's consumerism of fast food. Even at the expense of health, people still opt for these unhealthy meals. This essay outlines some possible explanations for this phenomenon and gives out some ways to improve unwholesome eating practices.

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He recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your leather say how you feel about his performance. Give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

I recently saw your performance at Toronto big concert. I was really amazed by your singing methods and guitar playing. So I decided to write this letter to express my feelings about the concert along with asking about your advice on improving my own level of performing.

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The free movement of goods across national borders has long been a controversial issue. Some people argue that it is necessary for economic growth, while others claim that it damages local industries. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that the free movement of items in most national borders is known as a controversial issue. Many claimes that this is one of the most essential things for economic growth ,however, some people opine that this could be dangerous for domestic products and industries. From my point of ,view, I completely believe that the close economic connection is dispensable for all countries around the world.

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During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter • Remind him when and where you met. • Tell him what kind of job you are interested in. • Say why you think you would be suitable for the job.

I hope you would kindly recall that we have met on the trip from Ohio to Oslo in Xyz airways on December 22. Thus, as you encouraged, I write this letter to enquire about the job positions available in your chain of Restaurants.

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Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. write a letter to Mrs. barrettes your letter suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available

Noticing your advertisement in the classifieds, I found that I'm looking for such an opportunity. I hope you would allow me to help you in the coming summer when I explain.

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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter, explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work

I write this letter to express my interest in the voluntary position as a guide. I hope that you would consider me to use this opportunity when I explain my qualifications.

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers.

I write this letter to inform you about my inability to continue my evening-part time course on "embedded systems".Therefore, I hope you would understand my situation when I explain.

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You use the local swimming pool often and during one of your visits you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager and say – What the problem was and when it happened – What the swimming pool staff have done about it – Suggest your own solution to the problem.

I am writing to complain about the problem that I experienced with the swimming pool recently. This is JD, I regularly visit the recreation centre to use the pool and other facilities.

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You hired a car from a company, while. While you were driving you had a small accident. Write a letter to the company to explain it. In your letter: when and where you hired it describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident

This is Priya Anand. I am writing to inform you about the car accident which I experienced recently. Please allow me to explain.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Arguably, it is commented that the unique and effective measure to shrink traffic congestion these days in cities is to diminish the individuals' necessities in trip, job, schooling or purchasing items in bazaars or supermarket. Personally, I strongly disagree with the view since the ruling power should enhance public facilities. Although shortfall in financial resources hinders willpower. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Advertisement is an inseparable process in any kind of business. These strategies include highlighting goods or services in a refreshed way. In my opinion, it has a positive impact and shows effectiveness in advertising. Thus, companies may increase incomes and we see new advantages of sales.

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The leaders or directors of organizations are often elderly people. However, some sat that young people can also take the lead of organizations or companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A certain number of current employees adopt a convenient notion that the new generation can play a substantial role in business management. I strongly coincide with the former declaration, and this essay will hold the reasons for my view.

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You are interested in attending a short course at a college in an English speaking country. Write a letter to the college administration. In the letter: • mention what course you would like to attend • give details about your educational background and work experience • say why you choose this college

I am writing to express my interest in the six months diploma course in graphic designing. This course would help me to develop my presentation skills at my job. Moreover, I have always had the will to study at the University of West London, and this is indeed a good opportunity.

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Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession. Is this a positive or negative development?

Issues related to public communication are frequently discussed these days. It is argued that superstar and movies stars have shared their perspectives on public issues which they lack sufficient information over recent years. Despite the fact that there are some drawbacks, I would argue that there are more benefits. The explanation of the merit will be shown in the following paragraphs.

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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

I am writing to draw your attention to the issue that I am currently facing with my accommodation. Even though I was comfortable at the beginning, however, it has become difficult to tolerate over the recent past.

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People recently are face lots of celebrities whom most of them are known for their beautiful face and huge money which they owe ,rather than their abilities.That is a wrong perception for others specifically youths who tend to mimic celebrities.I agree with this statement somewhat but I think it is not totally true.

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The apartment that you have rented was repaired recently. Later you discovered some defects in repairs. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain what the problem is suggest how it can be fixed say what you would like the landlord to do about it.

I writing to you to inform the problems associated with the recent repair works that had taken place in my apartment. Please allow me to explain.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a University should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a University?

Recently, an educational issue related to the main function of a university has been widely discussed among people the world over. Some argue that universities should only provide students with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. I disagree with this viewpoint almost entirely. As far as effectiveness, technology development, and finance are concerned, I strongly hold that university should teach all kinds of technology regardless of whether the course is useful to the work.

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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