IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 3

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Your mentor recommended you to learn a new language and gave you contact details of a teacher. Following his advice, you need to write a letter to the teacher and say: • What is your motivation to learn a new language • How can the teacher help you • When you will be ready to start

I am writing to request your association to learn the Chinese language. In fact, my work manager suggest your name as a professional and well-known teacher in several nations, and I am in need of your help to accomplish this required task.

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One problem face by almost every larger city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

It is undeniable that traffic jam remains a serious problem especially in nations that show a high population . I think that this issue has several certain causes and there are several effective approaches that should be taken in order to address this issue .

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Arguably, it is commented that the unique and effective measure to shrink traffic congestion these days in cities is the diminishing of individuals' necessities in trip, job, schooling or purchasing items in bazaars or supermarket. Personally, I strongly disagree with the view since the ruling power should enhance public facilities. Although shortfall of financial resources hinders willpower. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

These days, the capabilities of the Internet have been changing and the vast majority of the population embarks to work from home. I tend to think that such a tendency has both positive and negative sides. Nevertheless, I believe that if household offices are employed for the right purposes, their benefits outweigh their drawbacks. I advocate strongly with my own views and am going to provide some arguments, which would be confirmed my position.

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The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?

Government should fund some projects about preventing health problems because it is more crucial than treating by drugs. In my opinion, I totally agree that the fund of government should be allocated to the prevention of illness. Nevertheless, both sides along with my perspectives linked to the topic will be outlined in the following paragraphs.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a lot of more money than people in other important professions. Some people think that this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In the concurrent world, exercising is more and more professional. And those sportsmen can have lots of benefits when they become famous. Some people consider that it is not fair since they only devote themselves to that field. While others argue that they are worth this since they have been trained so many years. This essay is going to discuss both sides and my own opinions.

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A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people believe that economic and social status are the factors to value an individual's worth today, and honour, compassion, belief, tend to be classified as old fashioned values and are no longer essential in assessing someone else worth. However, I strongly disagree with the statement because well-being and self-respect are the long-lasting aspects that all human being needs to have.

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You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter, - Give details of your visit to the restaurant - Explain the reason for the celebration - Say what was good about the food and the service

I am writing this letter to give my appreciation to your restaurant and the staff for their hospitability. Recently, on the 23rd of this month, we visited your restaurant late-night to fulfil our cravings for the exotic gourmet food that you serve.

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Nowadays doctors can become very rich. Maybe they should not focus on profitable activities such as plastic surgery or looking after rich patients and concentrate more on patient's health, no matter how rich they are. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, clinicians are concentrating on expensive beauty surgeries that allocate enormous sums instead of taking care of sick people who demand essential operations for their wellness. I totally coincide with the former statement, and this essay will hold the reasons for my view.

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Some people feel that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others feel that the circumstances of an offense should be taken into account when deciding on a punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would argue that coeducation is not good, while others believe it is beneficial for the future. While studying in a single-sex school can give you the utmost privacy, I strongly believe in mixed education because it prepares us for life ahead.

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Many adults nowadays prefer spending their free time playing computer games. Is this a positive or negative development?

In this fast-evolving world, with the advent of technology, numerous people squander most of their time in front of screens as a form of leisure rather than relishing in outdoor activities. Today addiction towards computer games has tremendously risen not only among youngsters but is observed in adults too. However, I completely affirm that spending enormous freedom on gaming can result in escalating loneliness and depleting productivity.

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Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh the advantages. give reasons and examples in your answer.

Arguably, connoisseurs throughout the world have debated whether the use of chemical manure in the farms surpass its disadvantages or not. Personally, I believe it does not outweigh since these toxic elements damage permanently the land. However, it has its swift benefits. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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Art is considered an essential part of cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?

Scientific or technological issues could indeed seem more useful compared to art. Nowadays, artistic disciplines have less value even if it is considered an essential part of cultures throughout the world. It is questioned what could be done to make a person have more enthusiasm in those matters. In my opinion, creativity and imagination are as important as a scientific topic because it helps us desenvolve a different part of our brain.

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A museum near your house is looking for people to do part-time voluntary! Unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work in your letter: • Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • Give details of when you would be available for work

Recently I have found your vacancy in the local newspaper, so I would like to present myself as a candidate for this work. I have already applied for voluntary work there.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Other, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Most people enjoy to do repeated circumstances and avoid new things, according to some people. Others, however, opine that it is a better way to do something different. In my opinion, almost everyone should try to do what they have not done it before. Both sides along with my perspectives linked to the topic will be outlined in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the workforce has a difference in their opinion with many accepting their financial conditions, unwanted jobs and trying to live with them.However, others put effort to achieve their ambitions. In my opinion, losing hope creates more problems and a person should focus on the goals without thinking of the current circumstances.

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Some cultures think old people are of higher value than the youth, while other cultures value the youth more. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There is a debate whether who is precious, some ideologies believe that older people are precious while others believe that youth are. This essay discusses both sides of this argument and why I believe that older people precious than youngsters.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. You should write at least 250 words.

Some individuals commented that stamina is the most relevant to a sportsman or sportswomen to be well-succeed in games. However, others believe that intelligence confidence is the most pivotal. Personally, I advocate the second opposing the initial since mental confidence overcomes challengers of diverse order. Although the body strength plays its role. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. others, However believe that school is the place to learn this discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Some individuals commented that relatives should train Boys and Girls to become better communities members. However, others argue that educational institutions are the most appropriate to that. Personally, I advocated the first view opposing to the second since collateral gives the initial educational step to youngsters, while schools provide solely scientific knowledge. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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There is too much noise in many public places in cities. What are the causes of this problem? What can be done to solve the problem?

Many public places in urban areas, these days, are getting too noisy. This essay will be discussing some factors and some measures that should be taken to solve the issue.

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