You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of magazine. In your letter •Correct the information in the article. •Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information. •Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation.

Dear Sir or Madam,
To begin
with, I am writing
this
letter to intimate you about the mistake your international travel magazine made in its
last
week's article which was published online. It was mentioned in the article that my town, Bristol, was founded in 1605.
However
, it came into being after the American Civil War in 1670.
Furthermore
, I believe your journal is well-recognised worldwide. You have
this
great reputation to maintain around the world as you are an influential international magazine. In
this
way, it is paramount for your organisation to correct the false information being provided in your weekly
as well as
monthly articles.
Therefore
, I would highly recommend you set up a team for efficient rechecking of the articles before they are published online or printed in newspapers.
This
effective proofreading will turn out to be useful in dealing with misleading information. Yours faithfully, Hamza Imran
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