A letter to company which is looking for help to renovate school building and you want to help for it In your letter - when you could start -what you could do - why you want to help

Dear Sir, I have heard that you are looking for someone help to renovate Nakıopglu Hıgh

School

. I can work as a volunteer. I want to make children happy with their new

school

. I am available in June and July every Monday, Wednesday and Friday from 1pm to 7 pm. But in the

last

week of July, I have to go to my homeland. So I can help you until that week. I am good at painting walls. I can design some cartoons. It may be funny for children.

Moreover

, I can help renovate tables and chairs. And I have an idea about the library. We can make a gate with books. It can

also

look like part of the decorations. I want to help to renovate the

school

because when I was a child I study at an old

school

and some people came and repaired our

school

. I want to do something like that. If you accept me, you can reach me by email or call me. Regards.

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