Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • thank your friend • explain how useful the present is • arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon

Dear Mehmet, I'm writing

this

letter to thank you for my birthday present. It made me very happy and I won't forget how thoughtful

this

is. I was told that I need a smartwatch for my medical situation. After a heart attack, I need to check my heart rate or blood pressure. I added my partner as an emergency contact so, if something bad happens to me, he gets a call. I think

this

technology is amazing! Plus, I loved all the functions. I can use it as a credit card. As I forget my wallet all the time,

this

function will be useful to me.

Also

, I can check my e-mails anytime. Anyways, I hope you are available

this

weekend. I am planning a dinner party

this

Saturday and you will be welcome here. I am going to cook something in Turkish cuisine there will be vegan options so, you can invite your girlfriend, too. Best wishes.

Submitted by ebeyza34 on Fri Mar 31 2023

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Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • thank your friend • explain how useful the present is • arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon

Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Fresh water has become a global concern for the world. What are the causes of it.? What measures government and individual should take to resolve the problem? Give reasons and examples for your answer.