You visit a cafe every day. Write a letter to the manager of the cafe. In your letter – Say what you like about the cafe - Suggest an improvement to the cafe – Explain the benefits of your suggestion

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

to express my gratitude towards services received at your cafe. I am a regular customer of yours and visit the cafe every evening. I like the food quality and hospitality of your firm and I must say they are of benchmark quality.

However

, there are some things which can be improved.

Firstly

, there are no air conditioners installed so on hot days it is difficult to sit in the cafeteria.

Secondly

, surprisingly, online payment is not accepted in your shop so it is difficult to pay sometimes. These suggestions will help you to improve customer satisfaction and they will become your permanent customers for sure. They do not have to search for other options because of hot days and no online payment facility available at your cafe. I am pretty sure that it will help you to grow your business exponentially. I hope you will consider my suggestions. Yours faithfully, Kishan

Submitted by kishanpatel2550 on Wed Mar 29 2023

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