Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?
In today's society, there is a common belief that having a lot of
money
is the main key to happiness. This
essay will discuss how people
become happy using a lot of money
and also
mention other ways to become happy in life.
To commence with, there are some outcomes from having a lot of money
which make folks pleased. Firstly
, people
can fulfil their dreams whatever they have in life. For example
, rich people
can buy a
expensive car and Change the article
an
also
they can establish a business from scratch. In contrast
, poor
and middle man cannot think about those things which are very expensive. Correct article usage
the poor
Secondly
, high earners are making money
from money
. For instance
, wealthy people
are investing their money
in the Stock Market, and they are becoming happy after receiving high return rates of
their Change preposition
for
money
. Lastly
, rich folks might go anywhere in the world for refreshment
and they live in five stars hotels. Fix the agreement mistake
refreshments
Hence
, they thought money
make them happy.
Despite this
, there are many other ways to live happily. One of that factors is that
living with understanding. Correct word choice
apply
In other words
, people
who understand to
their family in every Change preposition
apply
situations
than Change to a singular noun
situation
it
must possible that they can live without any stress and anxiety. Correct pronoun usage
apply
For instance
, it is really good if men understand the adverse situation of caring women
like the Menstrual Cycle, and they love them Change preposition
for women
on
that time. Change preposition
at
Consequently
, that family live
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life
with
happily. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, people
are doing some regular exercise in the morning and become fresh should always stay healthy and gladly.
In conclusion, some rich communities believe that the reason behind their happiness is the
Correct article usage
apply
money
. Even though money
is one of the factor
to become happy in life, there are so many other factors which Change to a plural noun
factors
more
important than Add a missing verb
are more
money
and due to
that, people
are living happy
.Change the adjective
happily
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