At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh its disadvantages?
Nowadays, the population of few countries provides a great number of young
people
compared with the elder people
. The major benefit of it is more and more adult people
will able to earn more money
, but there are few drawbacks as well. However
, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
The main benefit of having more younger people
is they can earn more money
for their family. If a family have more younger people
, then
they can work more for their family. As a result
, the family will be benefited when they get enough money
to maintain their life. Another positive aspect is, the growth of a nations economy
will be faster. When a Change to a genitive case
a nation's economy
the economy of a nation
country
has more people
to work, then
some of them will go to an overseas country
for a job. Thus
, they will be able to send remittance to their motherland and by doing this
, the country
will be benefited. For instance
, a huge amount of Bangladeshi people
working in other countries and also
, they sent a good amount of money
to their country
. As a consequence, the economy of Bangladesh is moving faster.
However
, there are few downsides as well. Firstly
, society
will feel the lack of experience from older people
. Young people
may not have enough knowledge to solve a problem. So, this
can be an issue for society
. Secondly
, society
can not give proper educational support to young people
. For instance
, when a country
has lots of people
for education, then
there will need more money
and proper planning to educate the young people
. So, this
will be a great problem for a poorer country
to give enough support to each individual.
In conclusion, the lack of elder people
can be a problem for society
when it comes to solving a massive issue. However
, there are lots of upsides to having young people
. Because they not only help their family but also
can support the economy of their nation.Submitted by rajjakjamil75 on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...