You have returned from your vacation to stay a bed and breakfast.When you have checked your bank account,you realised youhave been charged twice for the deposit. Thank the host for your stay Explain the double deposite charge situation Ask the host for a refund

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Dear Sir I'm writing a letter to you to bestow me

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I checked my bank

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, I realised I have been charged twice for the deposit. As it is known

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, I want to thank you for the well-equipped bedroom and for the wonderful breakfast. As

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, when I got home I checked my bank

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, I request you to return the excess money. You can send the money in cash or to my bank

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looking forward to being accepted my request. You would be so kind to me

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if it is accepted as soon as possible

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faithfully Go'zalxon

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You have returned from your vacation to stay a bed and breakfast.When you have checked your bank account,you realised youhave been charged twice for the deposit. Thank the host for your stay Explain the double deposite charge situation Ask the host for a refund

Fully explain your ideas

People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less.

Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Dicuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

When he was nearly thirteen, my brother Jem got his arm badly broken at the elbow

some people believe that ghosts are real. Some others say they are an illusion. Give your opinion.