The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how
sugar
is produced from sugar
canes
. Fix the agreement mistake
cane
Overall
, there are 7 stages, begging with growing sugar
canes
and ending with drying and cooling sugar
.
To begin
with, it is needed time about 10-18 months for growing up sugar
canes
followed by harvesting via machines or hand. Fix the agreement mistake
cane
Then
, these gathered sugar
canes
are crushed in a special machine to a juice consistency. After that, this
juice got through a limestone filter, where it is purified. Next,
the juice is put in an evaporator in which it is heated until it will be transformed into syrup.
At the sixth stage in the process, the syrup underwent centrifuge, where sugar
crystals is
separated from it. Change the verb form
are
Finally
, the mass is cooled and dried into a trunk that provide
for prepares Change the verb form
provides
sugar
as a result
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