You have returned from your vacation staying at a bed and breakfast. When you checked your bank account,you realised you have been charged twice for the deposit. Thank the host for your stay. Explain the double deposit charge situation. Ask the host for a refund.

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Dear sir, My name is

zarna

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Zarina

Zara

patel. I am writing

this

letter to request for

refund

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a refund

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the

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of the

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amount of my stay at

bed

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the bed

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and breakfast, which has been debited twice from my account. I am a

full time

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worker at

multinational

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a multinational

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company.

However

,to recuperate

myself

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apply

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I went to Goa and Stayed in

bed

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a bed

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and breakfast hotel. Because of all the hospitality you provided ,the trip has become memorable for me. Thank you so much for every facility you provided during my stay. Despite I made

payment

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a payment

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on arrival through Paytm,the amount has been deducted on

second

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day

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of my

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stay. I was not aware of

this

situation,

untill

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until

I paid my credit bill and

seen

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my passbook entries. Since

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was aware of the incident, I immediately called the manager to let them

aware

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about

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the situation. They told me that if the host of the bed and breakfast will asses the issue and will give permission,

then

only they will be able to refund my amount. Kindly look

in to

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the matter urgently. 4536787901 is my account of Axis

bank

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Bank

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and [email protected] is my mail address,in case u need any information regarding the matter

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u can contact me . Yours sincerely, Zarna Dobariya

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You have returned from your vacation staying at a bed and breakfast. When you checked your bank account,you realised you have been charged twice for the deposit. Thank the host for your stay. Explain the double deposit charge situation. Ask the host for a refund.

Fully explain your ideas

Many parents believe that when their children read books for entertainment, they are wasting their time, and that they should only read serious, educational books. What is your opinion about this?

many parents today employ private tutors to teach their children after school hours. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Other, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both views and give your own opinion

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.