The bar chart below shows the leisure activities that teenagers in Canada report to be their favorite. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates four
favourite
hobbies of teens in Canada, namely sports
, computer
games
, music
and shopping. On the whole, while
most male teenagers find shopping and sports
the most exciting , these activities are the least interesting ones for female adolescents. However
, almost the same proportion of both genders enjoy playing computer
games
and music
.
The most exciting leisure activity
for boys
in Canada is shopping, peaking at 35% male teenage engagement. By contrast
, only around 5% of girls
report this
activity
to be their favourite
pastime. Similarly
, there is a significant gap between those male and female juveniles interested in sports
. While
almost 25% of boys
mention sports
as their favourite
hobby, the percentage of girls
who like indulging in this
activity
is just over 10%.
As for computer
games
and music
, there is almost similar engagement from both genders. Music
is reported to be a favourite
entertaining activity
by the same percentage of both boys
and girls
in Canada, at nearly 20%, whereas
only about 3% fewer girls
enjoy computer
games
in comparison to boys
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Vocabulary: Replace the words favourite, sports, computer, games, music, activity, boys, girls with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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