The table below shows information and prediction regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
The table illustrates the proportion of the
population
more than the age of sixty-five for three years i.e., 1988, 2000 and 2030 in three nations namely Canada, Germany and UK.
Here we can observe the value is highest for Germany in all three years. Initially
, this
category constituted twenty per cent
of the total population
,
and hiked by five per Remove the comma
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cent
in 2000. By 2030, it became thirty per cent
.
However
, the rise is minimum for the UK. In 1988 only fourteen per cent
of the total population
was aged 65 and above. By 2000 it rose by only fifteen per cent
, and in 2030 it constituted one-fifth of the total mass.
Canada maintained approximately the same growth over these years. In 2000 it was 21 per cent
, which is 5 per cent
more than that in 1988, and by 2030 same percentage of growth is visible and it stands with 26 per cent
of the total population
belonging to the age group of sixty-five and more.Submitted by anupriyahalder on
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