The table below show how many tourists from five countries visited Australia in different years from 2006 to 2010.
The table illustrates the
number
of visitors from New Zealand, Japan, Canada, China, Germany, and France to Australia
in different years between 2006 and 2010.
Overall
, amount of travellers to Australia
from most countries increased from 2006 to 2010. While
only the travellers
from Japan decreased.
Between 2006 and 2010, the Correct quantifier usage
number of travellers
number
of Chinese tourists
visiting Australia
rose significantly by about 100,000, which is the biggest. While
New Zealand’s tourists
fluctuated from 2006 to 2010 and then
, there was a moderate increase of around 30,000. In 2010, New Zealand had the highest number
of tourists
at 1,011,000 and China’s tourists
had the second higher at 360,000. Nevertheless
, France’s tourists
had the lowest at 93,000.
In addition
, the number
of visitors from Canada and German rose slightly by around 16,000 and 19,000, respectively from 2006 to 2010. Visitors from Japan to Australia
almost halved over the period. The number
of Japanese tourists
travelling to Australia
grew up dramatically by about 300,000 between 2006 and 2010.Submitted by ssirirat on
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