The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
This
bar chart depicts universal sales
of the top brands of cell phones from 2009 to 2013. It's clear from the graph that the Samsung
and Nokia
phones had the most significant merchants in this
period.
According to
what is shown, in 2009 we can see the Nokia
brand have the most selling which is reached about 498 sales
. And, Samsung
came after with an amount of nearly 248 sales
also
we can see Apple
company have a huge Change noun form
Apple's
plunged
and it's almost reached about 10 counts and Correct your spelling
plunger
ZTE
has almost 150 sales
, LG
represented nearly 120 sales
. Although
in 2011 we can see various merchants, Nokia
also
have approximately the same level in increasing which is about 435 sales
while
,
Remove the comma
apply
Samsung
have a minor increase with about 320 sales
and Apple
gradually grew and their sales
reached about 99, LG
had dropped slightly in this
year and ZTE
represented a slight increase almost can notice. While
,
Remove the comma
apply
in
2013 we can see in the graph Change preposition
apply
Samsung
had significant
soared with 450 and Change the adjective
significantly
Nokia
came after with 250 sellings and Apple
continue in grew and reached 150, LG
and ZTE
had not that match changes, 97sales
for Change preposition
with 97sales
LG
and 51sales for ZTE
.
To sum up
, we could say that Samsung
and Nokia
brands seem active in the work face in comparison with Apple
, LG
, and ZTE
which have no
that active during these years.Correct your spelling
not
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