The graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
line graph
illistrates
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illustrates

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the number of people, who visit one of a
caribbean
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Caribbean

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island
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islands

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during a
paricular
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particular

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period of time. There is a considerable increase of travellers visiting
this
place over
these 7 years period
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this 7 years period
these 7 years periods

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Although
in the early
period
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,period

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people preferred staying on
island
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the island

The noun phrase island seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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, later it has been changed as most of them used to stay on cruise ships. Between 2010 and 2017, there is a dramatic improvement
of
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in

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visitors by 2.5
millions
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million

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,
while
the number of travellers who stay on cruise ships has been rose markedly by 1.5
millions
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million

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. The crowd who used to stay is
plateued
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plateaued

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since 2013, and
this
shows
slight
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a slight

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decline
by
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of

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0.5
millions
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million

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on
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in

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