The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.

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bar chart provides information about the predicted rates of both genders in various

sport

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sports

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played in New Zealand in 2002. Units are measured in percentages.

Overall

, it can be seen that the highest percentage of

boys

playing

sport

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sports

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was higher than girls’ rates except in athletics, netball, and swimming.

whereas

, tennis and basketball had a similar average between 5% and 10 % for

boys

and girls. In terms of girls playing

sport

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in New Zealand in

2002

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the most popular and highest percentage of sports played was

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netball

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25%. Followed by, swimming activity had the

second

-highest rate

while

the lowest percentage was for cricket at around 23% and just 1% respectively.

On the other hand

, the number of

boys

playing

sport

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in soccer activity was higher than

other

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activity

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approximately 24%. Followed by the other activities had more than 15% that

boys

played

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more.

Moreover

, the rest of the sports activities that

boys

played were less

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under 14% in New Zealand in 2002.

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