Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

Some people harbour a belief that how

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choice

students

should select to

study

at the university

instead

they are forced to

study

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certain

courses

about science or

technology

, while others hold the reverse viewpoint. From my perspective, it is a controversial

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which deserves an in-depth discussion.

To begin

with, one of the main argument in its favour is that university

students

should be free to choose their prefered areas of

study

. Society will benefit more

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if our

students

ignite the passion

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learning which they are interesting

.

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Furthermore

, nobody can predict that which area of

study

will be most useful to society in the future and

also

it may be that employers value the creative thinking skills

instead

of technical skills; if

this

were the case, we would need to learn the knowledge of art, history and philosophy than science and

technology

.

On the other hand

, some people occasionally realize the fact that the universities should only provide the key subjects

courses

which will

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in the future. They may assert university

courses

such

as medicine, computer science, engineering and information of

technology

rather than some art degrees. It is true that these certain

courses

will offer more job opportunities, career progression, better salaries and

also

improve the quality of life for

students

.

Besides

aforementioned, the governments can ensure to bridge the gap between

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and human society

also

lead to

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the development

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of new

technology

and economic growth. In conclusion, despite the fact that universities focus only on certain subjects may bring the large for

students

future;

however

, I personally prefer

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system for

students

who can select what they want to learn.