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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like bout the cafeteria say what is wrong suggest how it could be improved

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with our canteen hygiene and cleanliness.
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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like bout the cafeteria say what is wrong suggest how it could be improved

I am writing this letter to you to bring your attention to the menu and quality of food in your cafeteria, Bruch Time. I am Isha, a student of B.Art.
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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like bout the cafeteria say what is wrong suggest how it could be improved

This is James Austin third-year student of this college studying in the political science batch .I am writing on the behalf of student union regarding the cafeteria of the college.This letter is to inform the management that though the ambience and seating area of this cafe is quite good but there are certain points that I want that college authorities should pay attention.
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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like bout the cafeteria say what is wrong suggest how it could be improved

I am just writing to express my feelings with regard to the cafeteria that is situated in my college and I eat a meal every day.Although almost everything goes smoothly,there are only a few things that need to be enhanced.
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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like bout the cafeteria say what is wrong suggest how it could be improved

I am student of Colombo University. I am writing this letter to inform that improvement of the deficiencies in the cafeteria.
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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, • explain what you like about the cafeteria • say what is wrong with it • suggest how it could be improved

I am john studying at your college from last two years and I always go to the cafeteria at lunchtime. I really like the menu of our college cafe because of the variety of food. I usually y eat a vegetable sandwich from there which is healthy for me and take some coffee along with this. Furthermore, cleaning is very appreciable, all the table and chairs neat and clean throughout the day. Staff is commendable and gives good service to every customer.
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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved

I am a resident student at Joanna Briggs Institiute of Technology, and a penchant visitor of our college cafeteria.
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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved

I am Kailash kamble studying in 2nd-year civil engineering. I am writing this letter regarding college cafeteria facility because I am using this facility since last 2 years along with my two best friends. We spend more time in a college canteen for food because we don't have another choice. The cafeteria area is very interesting and attractive along with light background music and Warm wall colours along with cartoons and caricatures makes it more and more engaging. It is appealing for a young generation. Cleanliness and prompt service is also impressive.
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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved

I am a regular visitor who eat lunch at the college cafeteria purely on grounds that the food service in it is hygienic and fresh, suitable priced and it has a friendly atmosphere. There are, however, a number of deficiencies which I believe should be put right.
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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved

I am a regular visitor who eats lunch at the college cafeteria purely on grounds that the food serviced in it is hygienic and fresh, suitable priced and it has a friendly atmosphere. There are, however, a number of deficiencies that I believe should be put right.
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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved

I am a regular visitor who eats lunch at the college cafeteria purely on grounds that the food service in it is hygienic and fresh, suitable priced and it has a friendly atmosphere. There are, however, a number of deficiencies that I believe should be put right.
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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved

I am a regular visitor who eats lunch at the college cafeteria purely on grounds that the foodservice in it is hygienic and fresh, suitable priced and it has a friendly atmosphere. There are, however, a number of deficiencies that I believe should be put right.
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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved

I am a regular visitor who eats lunch at the college cafeteria purely on grounds that the food serviced in it is hygienic and fresh, suitable priced and it has a friendly atmosphere. There are, however, a number of deficiencies that I believe should be put right.
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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved

I am a regular visitor who eats lunch at the college cafeteria purely on grounds that the food service in it is hygienic and fresh, suitable priced and it has a friendly atmosphere. There are, however, a number of deficiencies that I believe should be put right.
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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved

I am a regular visitor who eats lunch at the college cafeteria purely on grounds that the food served in it is hygienic and fresh, suitable priced and it has a friendly atmosphere. There are, however, a number of deficiencies that I believe should be put right.
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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved

I am writing this letter to express some of my suggestions, which may improve our college cafeteria seating arrangement. I am a student, Utsav, from the A-127 batch, studying Economics. My student ID is 456-RYD.
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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved

I am writing this letter to express my concern relating to our college cafeteria which is located between the library and the main building.
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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In you letter: *explain what you like about the cafeteria *say what is wrong with it *suggest how it could be improved

I hope you are doing good. As you are the editor of the weekly college magazine, I thought of informing you of a matter concerning the college cafeteria. I have noticed these things myself during lunch time and finally thought of telling you this.
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