Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

With regard to the development of technology in today’s life,

smartphones

are really popular and convenient.

Therefore

, many

children

spend a lot of

time

a day using their

phone

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paragraph will discuss

this

statement with relevant reasons.

To begin

with, the primary reason for

this

condition is that modern parents overly spend

time

on their everyday lives and jobs.

As a result

, they let their

children

play with modern devices without being reminded. If adults don't remind them,

kids

still think playing on the

phone

is the best activity.

In other words

,

children

will accept that bad habits are an essential part of life.

In addition

,

kids

are easily addicted to

smartphones

because phones can immediately satisfy their

interest

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. To illustrate, every

phone

is equipped with App Store or Google Play which makes it simple to download entertainment applications

such

as Facebook, YouTube, Discord, etc. It's undeniable that

smartphones

can bring benefits to

children

. First of all, phones have

educational

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value that

lead

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many parents to decide to buy a

phone

for their son and daughter.

For instance

,

kids

are able to find a lot of information, documents and other fields on Google which helps them to be more active in learning

as well as

their questions are answered quickly.

Moreover

, mothers and fathers can locate their

children

and contact them easily when needed.

However

, I consider that the bad effects outweighed the advantages.

Children

pick up information quickly, so incorrect information or online actions that adults cannot control will be remembered and carried out like acting violently in class or saying bad words.

Furthermore

,

kids

who easily spend a lot of

time

on

smartphones

will become quiet and afraid to talk to other individuals. In summary,

this

phenomenon includes positive and negative sides.

Thus

, mothers and fathers should spend

time

with their

children

, training them to use phones effectively, in accordance with their comprehensive development.