The diagrams below show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The following diagrams illustrate a structure

that is

used to generate

electricity

from wave power.

Overall

, it has two forms of generating

electricity

from the sea which I will explain in

this

article.

To begin

with, collected water in the chamber

which

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

goes left by left wave power.

In addition

, it has air in the column which goes up by the clock-rounded turbine and it will be made

electricity

On the other hand

, collected water in the chamber

which

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

goes right by right wave power.

In addition

, it has air in the column which goes down by the clock-rounded turbine which is the same direction as before and it will be made

electricity

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Vocabulary: The word "goes up" was used 2 times.

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The diagrams below show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

Some argue that it is the responsibility of parents to teach children about healthy eating habits, whereas others believe that teachers should be responsible for teaching their students how to eat in a healthy way. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?