The line graph illustrates three different kinds of crimes that occurred in Newport City center between 2003 and 2012.

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The chart displays statistics regarding the different crimes in Newport City between the

years

2003 to 2012. The crimes shown are burglary, car theft and robbery. The general trend seems to

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fluctuations in car theft and robbery

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although

altough

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although

, both stayed quite

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steady

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over the

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even tough

, both statistics seemed quite

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very

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different robbery stayed

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between

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between

500 and 1000

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incidents

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incidents

per year,

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whilst

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while

, car theft stayed

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2500 incidents per year,

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burglary had a

masive

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massive

decrese

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decrease

over the

years

peatuing

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featuring

in 2004 at over 3500 cases and

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steadily

decreasing all the way to just under 1500 cases,

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2012

however

this

statistic reached its

lowelt

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lowest

point in 2008 at around 1000 incidents

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and

lightly fluctuated over the

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, cases

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expecially

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especially

in the first few

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most of them reaching their lowest point in 2008,

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, all 3 types of crime stayed around the same for the

last

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very

slight fluctuations towards the end.

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The line graph illustrates three different kinds of crimes that occurred in Newport City center between 2003 and 2012.

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