Some organis'ations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Other value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

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People's opinion differs whether the institution and company should be allowed to dress for their desire. I should strongly argue that the quality of

work

is important than appearance, But the attire code must different for each sector. On the one hand, appearance should not be a crucial factor to evaluate the success of an organisation.

Instead

work

placement, quality of product, social contribution are important for a company career.

For example

, the Facebook company never follow the rules for dressing,

instead

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,instead

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they have the acknowledgement of the people and widespread influence around the world. Even the chairman of Facebook Mark Zuckerberg is rarely seen in a suit.

Furthermore

, the casual costume for

work

makes them feel uncomfortable, resulting in an increase in the

work

productiveness.

On the other hand

, the dress code is essential in some companies.

For instance

, Police officers, doctor, nurses,

in particular

, are required to wear a uniform.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

Many schools these days have problems with poor student behaviour. Why do you think these problems occur? What could be done to tackle these problems?

Some people think that all young people should be required to stay in full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion