You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter - Describe what you enjoyed about the course - Say how much cooking you have done since the course - Suggest another cookerycourse you'd like the school to offer.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my gratitude for the recent

cookery

course

that I attended at your school

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and to provide some feedback on my experience. I enjoyed so much in the

cookery

course

Firstly

, I enjoyed

to make

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an Italian dish

first

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time.

Moreover

, I really liked the way of cooking that learnt

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my instructor.

Secondly

, I liked the way how to make seasoning for particular dishes. After that

course

, I made so many dishes for my family and friends. My daughter liked Thai

Foods

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so much

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, I made a Thai dish for her, and she really liked it.

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, I

also

tried to make

Pizza

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base with the help of your booklet, and it was

also

good and tastable.

Lastly

, I would request you to arrange another

cookery

course

about how to make Chineses Food. I am really waiting for your next session. Thank you once again for

your

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great

cookery

course

you did. I very much hope that you will be able to arrange

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the next

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course

. Yours faithfully, Milav Soni

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