You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbor to come

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Dear John, Hope you are doing well. I am Robert who lives in the same apartment in Fair Crossings next to yours.I recently

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moved in here after my job transfer.I hope you remember me we met at the parking lot the other day. I am excited to relocate to my new home and on the occasion of ,

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I plan to arrange a party for my friends and family.It will be attended by 40 people, we have dinner with a variety of dishes followed by loud music to enjoy ourselves.In ,addition we have various games for the night.It will be a fun-filled evening.I plan to make it more interesting by looking out for a theme for the night.I have

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decorated the backyard with lights and arranged for a barbecue . I would really appreciate it if you could come over and join us.Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Robort.

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbor to come

Nowadays most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions.

Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, people work in more than one job and often change career several times during their life. To what extent it is positive or negative development?

“People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest making it easier?”