“People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest making it easier?”

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Today, people often find it difficult to adapt to

new

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new situations

the new situation

a new situation

situation

For example

, when you have

first

child

or you have an

illness

.Whereas, you need make some changes in your

live

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life

lives

Moreover

, it is harder than it seems.

For example

Accept space

when you

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are being

illness

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ill

.I think there have many

cause

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causes

why you are ill.

For example

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caught a cold or drank something cold.

Firstly

, when you are ill your daily routine is changing.

Second

, you can’t do things that you do before your

illness

.Today lot of people using internet to

cures

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cure

their

illness

or using traditional medicine.But many doctors

not recommend

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don't recommend

aren't recommending

use

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using

internet

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the internet

to cures.I think the best way to adapt

this

situation

with

illness

just go to

doctor

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the doctor

a doctor

and consult with him. Not just

illness

can make difficult with

adapt

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adapting

new

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new situations

the new situation

a new situation

situation

Likewise

situation

when you have a

child

, or baby.You will have problems with sleep and

whole time

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the whole time

you need

spend

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to spend

for your

child

.You must responsibility to your

child

and it is even harder than seems.But to adapt

this

situation

, I think you need

just consult

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to just consult

with other mothers that have more experience and consult with

doctor

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a doctor

doctors

. In

summarize

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summarizing

, adapt to new

situation

harder than it seems.All examples below

provides

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provide

it.In

short to

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short, to

adapt is easier, you need some help from others.Like consult with your doctor, when you ill or take advice if you have a baby.

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