You recently borrowed something from a friend. Unfortunately, the item has become damaged. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter remind your friend that you borrowed something from him/her explain how the item became damaged suggest how you can resolve the issue of the damaged item

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Dear

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friend H Hello. How are you? I am writing

this

letter to say sorry

what

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for what

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you lend me

lase

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last

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week. Do you

remeber

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remember

that I borrowed your pen

last

Friday? At that time I could not give it back to you because I left school

earier

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earlier

. I thought I would return it on

monday

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Monday

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However

, My young

sisther

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sister

who is 5 years old came to my room

play

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to play

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with it and have broken

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Saturday morning. I

appolosize

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apologise

this

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for this

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and want to buy

same

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the same

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with

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yours. Today afternoon, I and my sister went to the store and found the exact same one. I am so sorry again and hope you accept my mind. See you on Monday

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school. Have a nice day. With love Hera

Submitted by Hera on Mon Apr 17 2023

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You recently borrowed something from a friend. Unfortunately, the item has become damaged. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter remind your friend that you borrowed something from him/her explain how the item became damaged suggest how you can resolve the issue of the damaged item

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Many young people who leave school hold a negative attitude towards learning. Why does this happen? What are the solutions?

When the time comes to commence full-time employment, individuals who have graduated from university deserve a higher salary than those who have not. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

More and more people want to own items, such as cars, clothing and other things, that are made by famous brands. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Many societies has homeless people. some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. To what extent do you agree?