The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that open it in one country between 2011 in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.
The Line chart compares the
number
of shops shut down and newly opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
It's clear that there is dramatically decrease in closing in 2015, and the shops hit a higher number
for opening in 2011.
For further
information, the graph illustrates that the closers shops slightly raised in number
to 7000 by 2013 before it had to fall and 2015 to approximately 500, yet it jumped next year to 5000 and remained almost the same for last
year.
Also
, it reveals that the country had numerous openings in 2011 for 8500 shopping stores, then
dropped in 2012 to nearly half, enjoys gradually for a second couple of years to reach the lowest number
which is 3000 by 2018Submitted by ihanenn1 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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