The only way to improve safety on our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offences. What extend do you agree or disagree?

Establishing rigorous punishments for driving violations is the only way to improve safety on our roads. I totally agree with the statement. I believe

this

approach

will lead to fewer offences on the roads. Viewed from the driver’s side,

this

approach

will raise fear and caution because common people do not want to get any punishment.

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, stricter punishments are easily applied on the road.

This

approach

is more corrective action rather than preventive action. Using

this

approach

, the government only focuses on establishing the rule

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citizens. Practically, it will be helped by police or cameras to monitor the offences.

This

way is easier than increasing the driver's awareness of safety, it will conduct many socialization and workshop events for civilians to raise their awareness of safety.

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,

Evenless

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if the punishment is related to a fine, the higher fine will be

more scary

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for most people.

This

approach

will be very effective for common people. Especially in emerging countries with lower economic citizens.

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they would be more careful to spend their money. The civilian will prioritize their money for primary needs

instead

of paying the fine.