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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The three charts illustrate the methods of solving dangerous
waste
 products in terms of three countries namely the Republic of
Korea
,
Sweden
, and the United
Kingdom
. Looking from an
overall
 perspective, it is readily apparent that
while
 recycling is the main way to solve dangerous
waste
 products in
Korea
,
Sweden
 and the United
Kingdom
 prefer to dig
this
 rubbish underground.
Moreover
, there are far more ways to deal with dangerous
waste
 in the United
Kingdom
 compared to other nations. A deep analysis of the charts provided reveals that 69% of the amount of
waste
 was recycled in
Korea
, making up the largest proportion of recycling methods among the three countries compared to the percentage of 25% in
Sweden
. It can be seen that there was about 22% of
this
 dangerous trash was dug in the land,
whereas
 only 9% of that was burned by fire in
Korea
. Looking at the charts in more detail, in the United
Kingdom
, solving
waste
 products by digging was considered to be the most popular way (82%), which is more than 27% of that in
Sweden
 (55%). There was only a total of 2% in the proportion of incineration in the UK,
while
 the data was 10 times higher than that in
Sweden
, with 20%. It is
also
 notable that in the United
Kingdom
, chemical treatment and dumping at sea made up exactly the same proportion of rubbish dealings, at exactly 8%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, korea, sweden, kingdom with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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