The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009
The table illustrates the percentage of students'
attendance
in four types of secondary
schools
between 2000 and 2009.
It is clear that
the
attendance
rate of students in voluntary
schools
, grammar
schools
and specialist
schools
declined throughout the period.
While
community
schools
had the highest rate of
attendance
. Looking into more detail, in 2000, voluntary
schools
reached an
attendance
rate of 52%, which was the highest compared to other
schools
in that period. By 2009 the number of pupils reached its lowest at 20%.
However
, in that same period, Community School
attendance
jumped from 12% in 2000 to 30% in 2005, reaching 58% by 2009 In 2000, the Grammar
Schools
' presence record placed the second highest at 24%s but suffered a significant decline reaching 12% in 2009. Meanwhile, specialist
schools
faced a steady decrease percentage of 1% each year
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