rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximize chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Students spend a great deal of time and money on tertiary study,

therefore

vocational subjects would be a better investment in terms of immediate job opportunities.

However

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everyone has an aptitude

fordcience

, engineering or medicine

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and there is a need for graduates with

expeertise

skillfulness by virtue of possessing special knowledge

expertise

gained from arts courses. In subjects

such

as philosophy

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students learn a valuable set of skills.They become active thinkers who learn how to

slove

find the solution to (a problem or question) or understand the meaning of

solve

problems, rather than passive learners who memorise facts and other people's ideas. Philosophy students become proficient at critical and moral thinking

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argumentation and debate. The ability to examine and analyse topical issues or challenge the status quo is very important. After all, someone needs to question the results or indeed the usefulness of scientific research, the politician's assertions, and historical events and assumptions in general. What is more

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saandals

disgraceful gossip about the private lives of other people

scandals

in business and government

emphasise

to stress, single out as important

emphasizes

the need

foe

appropriate to; intended for

for

ethics in corporate and public domain.

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rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximize chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

People of twenty-first century have better quality of life compared to those who lived in the previous centuries. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer Nations. However, the government of richer Nations should take responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such area. What is your opinion?

Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they out to be optional instead of compulsory to what extent do you agree

Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive development?

Some people believe that lessons on becoming a good parent should be included in school curriculum. Others think that it is not essential for students. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.