Your friend has written to you asking for your advice on his/her parents who will be visiting your area. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: Suggest the places they can visit Recommend a place where they can stay Offer to do something with them.

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Dear Sam, How are you

buddy

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? I am so happy to hear that your mom and dad are going to be in my city next week. It is a nice and

quite

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quiet

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place, yet has so much do around. I can guide you on the best attractions around. Your parents can visit the Blue Mountain village

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has a lovely rural vibe, and

beautiful

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view of the valley. They

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offer

cable-car

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cable car

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rides across the mountains which is totally breathtaking. In fact, I have a friend who owns a lovely cabin there, where your folks can stay for a day or two. It has an amazing view of

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at night. I am sure they will love it. They can

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visit the famous Niagra

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which

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good for a

day-trip

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. If they plan to visit

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Niagra on

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Saturday

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, I can join them for the boat ride. It would be so nice to meet them after all these years. Don't hesitate to ask if they need any help when they are around. Hoping to see everyone soon. Take care Apoorva

Submitted by apoorva.badola on Mon Apr 17 2023

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secondly
thirdly
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moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Include greeting and closing

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Your friend has written to you asking for your advice on his/her parents who will be visiting your area. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: Suggest the places they can visit Recommend a place where they can stay Offer to do something with them.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. why do you think that is? what can be done to reduce the crime rate.

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