crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. why do you think that is? what can be done to reduce the crime rate.

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nowadays

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Nowadays

, there have been numerous problem related to

crime

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is said that

crime rate

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the crime rate

is higher in metropolitan areas than it is in rural areas.

This

problem is caused by many different reasons which will be discussed in

this

essay before the solutions to it are given. There are

number

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a number

of reasons why

this

issue exists.

First

, since urban areas

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are

ethnically diverse than rural areas,

therefore likelihood

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the therefore likelihood

of conflict leading

crime

among people.

For instance

, greater lack of mutual understanding and familiarity

aming

in the middle of

among

individuals in urban areas. Especially that could lead to unnecessary fight, which potentially leads to

crime

Second

, since a number of immigrants increase

constanlly

without variation or change, in every case

constantly

in urban areas, metropolitan areas must compete for limited opportunities and scarce sources, which would leave other individuals' life at stake.

This

means that those who cannot compete with others would have a tendency to commit

crime

that just to make a living.

however there

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However, they're

However there

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however they're

a great deal of solutions to diminish

crime

rate

, in not only

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, not only in

big cities but

also

rural areas.

Firstly by

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Firstly, by

enforcing stricter punishments would act as a

deterent

something immaterial that interferes with or delays action or progress

deterrent

for motivation to commit

crime

. Realizing that the costs of breaking the law were higher, despite of facing serious difficulties, every potential criminal would not think twice.

Secondly

, since many offences can be traced back the lack of understanding among people from different backgrounds.

Therefore

locak official

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the local official

local official

should organise many

sociocultural

activities that would improve mutual relationships and resolve conflict

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For example

although

torento

the provincial capital and largest city in Ontario (and the largest city in Canada)

Toronto

is the most

multicutural

of or relating to or including several cultures

multicultural

city in the world,

crime

rate is among at the lowest thanks to

such

activities and cultural events.

This

complicated problem

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a complicated problem

caused by many different reasons. So it is difficult to find out the

effective

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most effective

solutions.

However

, above-mentioned measures would be helpful.

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crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. why do you think that is? what can be done to reduce the crime rate.

Include an introduction and conclusion

With all the problems in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other causes.

Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal of money than people in other important professions. Some people think it is fully justified while other think it is unfair.

Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even ass a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

Some people believe that charities should help people in need no matter where those people are in the world. Others feel that these organisations should only serve the people living in the country where they are based. Discuss both sides and give your own view.

In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?