You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

#minutes #neighbours #noise #house #apologise #action

Dear Jane, Thank you for writing to me regarding the

noise

emerging from repairs underway at my home.

Due to

the recent storm, Katrina, the roof was damaged and it started leaking. These repairs had to be done urgently, failing which we could end up with severe floor damage

due to

water leakage. I sincerely apologise for the

noise

pollution. I understand that with a six-month-old baby, you expect the neighbourhood to be much calmer. Rest assured, we would take the necessary actions to have a pleasant environment for both you and the baby.

Firstly

, we have restricted the repairs to be conducted between ten in the morning and four in the evening.

Secondly

, we have acquired machines that make less

noise

even though they are expensive.

Finally

, we have installed a wooden wall between the houses, which will act as a

noise

absorber. I understand your pain and I hope you will support us in these difficult times. Yours sincerely, Aravinthan

Submitted by dhinushika_m on Sun Apr 16 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical resource: 9.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms

Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 8.0

Answer all parts of the question

Use an appropriate tone

Word count

Become Premium

Check as many essays as you want
Analyze highlighted mistakes
Use the built-in grammar checker
Discover your weaknesses
Get suggestions to get a higher score
Browse the history of checked essays
14-day money back guarantee

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

<4
band
The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
It is widely known that the threat of nuclear weapons provide the peace all over the world. Moreover, it is a good source of cheap and clean energy. Even though the benefits of nuclear technology outweigh the disadvantages, there are always some risks that should be taken into account. In this essay I will outline drawbacks of using nuclear power and evaluate its significance
7
band
Governments spend a lot of money on public celebrations such as national holidays and public festivals. Some people say that the government spends too much on this and that they should use this money on other useful things. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
These days, the authorities are keen to waste the government budget in order to celebrate public holidays and festivals. With this reason, modern people are concerned about this issue. However, there are many people, who support the use of state budget for celebrations of holidays.
6
band
Most people say that in order for one to be fluent in a language, they must live and work for sometime in that Country. Do you agree/disagree?
Majority of the people are of the opinion that for an individual to be familiar with a foreign language, they should reside and gain employment in the native land. In my view, I am strongly against the opinion because there are alternative sources of learning foreign languages without relocating to its origin nation.
4.5
band
Young people today are better qualified than they were in the past. Some people argue that this is because competition for jobs is greater than it used to be. Others say that people only continue their educatiok because the opportunities exist for them to do so. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Millenials, now prefer to be well-educated in comparison to the past. Some people justifies this by stating that it's the job competition for which they have to study hard however, others believe that it is because of the numerous opportunities that they have now. I, nevertheless believes that it is both, the eligibility criteria for jobs and the globally integrated courses which encourages youth to have qualitative education.
9
band
Government should invest more money in science education rather than other subjects to develop the country. Do you agree or disagree?
It is forecasted that a nation will make more progress if the state authorities allocate a vast amount of their budget on the technical subjects instead of others. I partially agree with the statement as an allotment in other courses are needed to maintain balance in the society.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Most people say that in order for one to be fluent in a language, they must live and work for sometime in that Country. Do you agree/disagree?

Government should invest more money in science education rather than other subjects to develop the country. Do you agree or disagree?