Young people today are better qualified than they were in the past. Some people argue that this is because competition for jobs is greater than it used to be. Others say that people only continue their educatiok because the opportunities exist for them to do so. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Millenials

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Millennials

, now prefer to be well-educated in comparison to the past. Some people

justifies

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justify

this

by stating that it's the job competition for which they have to study

hard

Accept comma addition

hard, however

however

, others believe that it is because of the numerous opportunities that they have now. I,

nevertheless

believes that it is both, the eligibility criteria for jobs and the globally integrated courses which encourages youth to have qualitative

education

. It is the eligibility criteria which asks for higher

education even

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education, even

for a lower vacancy. The companies or organisations these days

demand

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demands

for lateral thinking skills which can only be attained after clearing minimum basic

education

.

Moreover

, the bar has been set up real high for the vacancies and people with lower grades and

education

fails to achieve it.

Hence

, people who are after getting jobs

only consider

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to only consider

the quantitative aspect of

education

.

However

,

in contrast

to

this

, the

education

system provides

plethora

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a plethora

of integrated courses which universalizes the

education

and people with

progressive spirit

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a progressive spirit

the progressive spirit

tend to grab the opportunities as

many

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much

as they can.

Hence

, considering the qualitative aspect of

education

.

For example

, Malala Yousaf, the youngest motivational speaker who talks about

reformation

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the reformation

a reformation

of the society only through

education

. Alongside, the availability of the study material now, is quite enormous, updated and authentic.

Therefore

, the youth aims at getting

higher and qualitative

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a higher and qualitative education

education

and

hence

, look for integrated courses. In my opinion, the blend of qualitative approach and quantitative approach of

education

only, can help our millennials to be young achievers like, Sabeer Bhatia (Indian-American Businessman) founder of hotmail and can provide the exposure which is mandatory to enhance the lateral skills and to draw out the maximum output from the human resource. To conclude, the youth would meet the job demands

if, they get

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, if they get

the exposure to the integrated educational system.