Your friend was supposed to visit you soon, but due to some personal problems you can’t meet him / her on the specified date. Write a letter to him or her explaining the situation. In your letter, you have to: – Apologise to your friend. – Explain why it’s not possible to meet now. – Suggest an alternative date for the meeting.

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Dear Isay, I am writing

this

letter regarding my invitation to you for

this

upcoming Saturday, April 15th. I am thrilled that we can

finally

meet each other after

such

a long time

however

, I regret to inform you that I will not be available on the said date

due to

an emergency.

Last

week, on Wednesday night, I received a call from my mother informing me that our dog has passed away. He was our first dog and was with us ever since I was 13 years old. I loved him so much that when I heard the news I was heartbroken by his sudden death. I will use

this

time to give time for myself to grieve his passing. I apologize for the cancellation of

this

occasion

although

if you are still free, I am available on April 29th.

Due to

this

unfortunate event, the dinner is on me. Thank you so much for your understanding. Yours faithfully, Rhea Emano

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical resource: 9.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms

Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 9.0

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Use an appropriate tone

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