A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: – explain the arrangements you have made for them to get keys and enter the house – tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house – say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening

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Dear Mohan, How are you? I am sure you must be excited to come to Mumbai next week for your studies. I was planning to take a leave on the day of your arrival, but I need to be present in the office for a meeting. Don't worry, I will make the arrangements for you. I will be leaving the keys to my

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with my next-door neighbours in flat B-103. I will inform

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in advance, and you can collect the keys from them. The railway station is not very far from my society, and you can easily take a taxi from there to my place. The taxi stand is right outside the gate on the left. Ask the driver to take you to the Sun and Sand

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. I will be back from

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by 4:00 pm, and

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we can together go to the Juhu beach to enjoy the sunset and delicious street food of the city. We can

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visit and explore your new college. Can't wait to see you. Apoorva

Submitted by apoorva.badola on Sun Apr 16 2023

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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