These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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A true relationship between two people requires face to face communication and

time

to truly get to know each other. Regardless of what humans think, all individuals admire the feeling of being wanted even if it’s a lie. The digital world has created the sense that it is passable to be who anyone wishes to be online.

However

, I believe that the way people know each other online and the type of relationships they make virtually have changed and for the worse.

Instead

of being a true friend to the people around each other, most are being turned inward, forgetting the true definition of a friend. Human beings have feelings and they feel broken at times and do not always smile but the Internet only shows one's happy moments keeping one from fully being known. The types of

friendships people

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friendships, people

make these days are quick and short lasting. In real

life

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life, friendship

friendship

, people see each other at one’s best and worst

time

and remain there for one another.

This

can never be compared to a social network

friendship

. One can only get to know someone by spending

time

together for the reason that the Internet cannot replace shared experience and personal communication.

However

, due to the Internet, people can make friends anywhere from the world which was quite impossible in the past era. Finding

school

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schools

and college friends and getting in touch with them is an advantage that the Internet offers to us.

However

, true

friendship

is not possible if two

people do

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people, do

not spend

time

together, share their common interests, talks a lot and help each other both in good and bad times. Rightfully, life is meant to be lived and have many physical experiences, bonding with another person’s physical presence.

Instead

of being a true friend to the people around each other, they are spending

time

online to make friends.

This

is, in my opinion, is a negative aspect of the digital era. In conclusion, making friends beyond boundaries and getting in touch with childhood friends could be the advantages of the digital

era but

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era, but

the way we are becoming dependent on the technology and the way we are pretending to maintain our

friendship

online have negative consequences on our personal, moral and social aspects.

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