A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntaryl unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter • explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • give details of when you would be available for work

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to apply for unpaid

part- time

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working

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museum

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the museum

a museum

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really interested in your hiring post, because since I

gratuated

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graduated

uni I want to

work

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in at

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service

job

and I think it is one of

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the thos

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those

this

kind

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job

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of job

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so it can be a good experience

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for

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me.

Morever

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, I

really

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impress

this

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with this

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job

that

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is voluntary ,

sometime

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sometimes

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I go

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apply

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somewhere for volunteering because I think it is really meaningful and good memory

also

I can

brodens

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broadens

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horizons

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my horizons

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. My major is aviation management so I already learned how to

work

at a service

job

. When I meet some bad customer or potential conflicts , I can treat

this

situation

perfactly

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perfectly

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last

year I had

work

experiecnce

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experience

art

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gallery so I know some knowledge about folk art. I am really fit exercise so I can carry

havy

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heavy

stuffs

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stuff

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or art. I can

work

from

Thurday

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Thursday

to Sunday anytime because I have to go to school and do

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task

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me everyday

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my class is finish coming next Month and it is my vacation day in school so I can

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anythime

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any time

after that time. I looking forward to

get

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a good information

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good information

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from you and I

hope

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work

there. Thank you. Yours sincerely, HWI JU JIN.

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical resource: 4.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms

Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 4.0

Answer all parts of the question

Use an appropriate tone

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