A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntaryl unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter • explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • give details of when you would be available for work

Deam
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Dear
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Sir or Madam Hello. I am writing
this
letter to apply
volunteer
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to volunteer
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in your museum. I am happy to get a chance to work there. I am a university student who is studying
the
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apply
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Art
.
However
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I am considering
to change
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my career to be a docent in
a
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art
museum in the future.
That is
the reason why I want to experience
this
job and apply to your museum.
Due to
my major, I have basic knowledge about artists and
history
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the history
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of
art
.
Also
, I like children and have great
patient
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. I think I can explain well to the visitors and make them
instrested
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interested
.
Moreover
, nowadays, I spend break time like a gap year for me, so I have enough time to work there. Even from the next week, I can start to work. If you are looking for a person who
truely
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truly
loves
art
, you should consider
about
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me. I hope
you
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positive response soon. Yours sincerely Hera
Submitted by Hera on

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