You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

#company #time #work #manager #amount

Dear Mr GK,

This

is Fahcang Kong from the credit risk department. I hope

this

email finds you well. The reason why I am writing

this

email is that as I mentioned

last

week, my grandmother has been suffering from

the

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cardiovascular disease since 2017. And currently, her health condition is deteriorating dramatically

due to

the widespread Covid-19.

Therefore

, I am afraid that I have no other option but to take a two-week unpaid leave to check on her as soon as possible.

However

, I will try my best to ensure that I will be available for emergency calls.

Moreover

, one of my colleagues Mark will take care of the portfolio that I have been monitoring. In terms of the credit risk spreadsheet, Jason will be responsible for implementing all the data and reporting any abnormal transactions immediately.

Finally

, just in case any of you need to use my office, the password of my computer is 02200059. Thank you in advance for your permission. Should you have any

further

concerns, please do not hesitate to contact me. Sincerely, Fanchang Kong, CFA, FRM

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