Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Law protects our lives become more safety because it deduces violent crimes.

Hence

, capital

punishment

is necessary to control

violence

in society. I agree with

this

notion. In

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essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and give my own point of view. On one hand,

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aw can protect our lives because people scare of the

punishment

.

This

can decline people who want to do something illegal things.

For example

, citizen know they do not allow drive after drink beer or wine,

otherwise

, they might be punished.

As a result

, people will alert they do not drink alcoholic beverages before they drive and

this

can reduce the accidents.

Moreover

, it

also

reduces some of the violent crimes.

For instance

, robberies have a downward trend because of the

punishment

increase. Some people are served four years in prison for robberies.

This

can reduce the violent because

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obbery, the robbers would hurt victims or other people around there.

On the other hand

, sometimes the

punishment

might not work, because it is a complicated problem to cause a person to do illegal activities. The best example is when people argue with others, they get angry and cannot control themselves to hit other people. In

this

case,

although

they know the

punishment

, they still cannot stop themselves to do something not allowed.

In addition

, some report said that

violence

is an on-going cycle because they experienced

violence

in their childhood.

This

makes them are more likely to grow to have a violent personality trait and towards their family.

Hence

, in

this

case,

punishment

cannot stop

this

kind of cause of

violence

. In conclusion,

although

some special case cannot stop by

punishment

,

such

as when people become emotional or some mental health problem.

However

, I strongly believe that law can protect our lives

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ecome more secure because it can reduce people who want to do illegal activities and to hurt people.