You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In you email. - Give details of the purchase - describe the problem - explain why you need a replacement urgently

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my

dissatisfation

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dissatisfaction

for

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the recent purchase from your online store. My name is Milav Soni and I am from Gujarat.

Firstly

, I would like to give you

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some

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information about my purchase. I bought a

suit

from your website

last

week.

Additionally

, My father was

also

impressed by looking

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at it

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apply

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online photos.

Hence

, he

also

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was also

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ready to

bought

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buy

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a blazer for

him

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himself

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Secondly

, I would like to inform you about the problem which I suffered. The size of the

suit

which I got from your delivery person

was differed

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differed

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from which I

oreded

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ordered

needed

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the website.

Moreover

, the length of the pants seemed to be

also

short. I

really

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am really

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dissapointed

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disappointed

with

this

service indeed.

Lastly

, I would like to exchange the

suit

much

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as early because I am going to attend my

niece

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birthday party next week, and it is really important to me to have

this

suit

because my wife and I will perform a dance.

Furthermore

, my wife and I had already planned to wear

this

matching colour of clothes

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her birthday party. I hope you understand my concern and give your 100% priority on

this

matter. I am waiting for your response. Yours faithfully, Milav Soni

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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