The graph below shows the wheat export of three different areas from 1985 to 1990
The graph illustrates the fluctuation of
Wheat
exportation
in three different regions in the world, namely Australia, Canada
and Europe from 1985 to 1990. Overall
, the exportation
of Canada
fluctuated wildly, while
that in Europe Communist showed an increase and the
Australia’s market declined over the 5-years period.
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According to
the data, in 1985, the wheat
exportation
of Canada
stood at the highest amount among the three areas, nearly 20 million
tonnes. It then
slightly dropped to approximately 17 million
tonnes the next
year before rocketed
up to around 25 Wrong verb form
rocketing
million
in 1988. However
, the following year, Canada
’s export hit a low of about 14 million
, the lowest and then
rose back to nearly the same level as in 1985.
In 1985, about 17 million
tonnes of wheat
were exported by European Community. However
, in spite of exporting less than Canada
, the wheat
exportation
surprisingly turned out the highest figure, compared to other
two countries, at a final point-over 20 Correct article usage
the other
million
. Different from Canada
and European Community, Australia exported the lowest amount of wheat
in 1985 and continuously declined over the period, except in 1986.Submitted by hoangandam on
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